Saturday, May 14, 2011

(cliches taste better in haiku form)

Don't say that you can't.
Knock. Knock again. Try the knob.
Try another door.

2 comments:

  1. Love this!! You're getting so good! Suggestion: I think it would pack an even bigger, more direct punch w/o the word "that" in the first line.

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  2. Thank you, Mae!! And that suggestion is rock solid. I'll play around with it...

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