Saturday, May 14, 2011

(cliches taste better in haiku form)

Don't say that you can't.
Knock. Knock again. Try the knob.
Try another door.
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2 comments:

  1. MidnightMaevenMay 15, 2011 at 6:45 PM

    Love this!! You're getting so good! Suggestion: I think it would pack an even bigger, more direct punch w/o the word "that" in the first line.

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  2. June V. May 16, 2011 at 9:39 AM

    Thank you, Mae!! And that suggestion is rock solid. I'll play around with it...

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